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George Evans's avatar

Great article Alli! Short, simple, to the point.

Consider me intrigued!

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David Nash's avatar

Hi Alli, I'm on my second stint as a first reader and this checks out. The only thing I would add is that in some submissions it comes across that the writer is trying too hard to sound literary. There are a million different voices, find your own and use it.

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Alli Rense's avatar

Yes I might include something of that nature in the follow-up!

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Wild Roof Journal's avatar

Thanks for sharing this, Alli!

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